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Nathan Slake's avatar

"Before him, his neighbours’ half-submerged terraced houses formed the opposite bank of a milk-white river, where once his street had run. To his left, the ground sloped away, with the houses and even taller buildings in the distance gradually swallowed whole. The spire was all that was left of the church, transformed into a lonely obelisk at the centre of a wide lake, the surface of which was totally becalmed. The horizon beyond was indiscernible."

Favourite passage. So wonderfully descriptive and vivid.

So does this mark the end of the fog? The phase transition has concluded?

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Allie McAllan's avatar

I'd been wondering at why the fog wasn't barging through the cracks under doors and windows! I'm glad it turned out to be (probably) a friend. I'd been developing a theory about how this all might end; happy to see that I was comfortably on the wrong track!

On the possibility of a more disturbing ending—there's still something a bit unsettling in the idea that the best (only?) way to get something across to us humans is to mess with our objects, if we want to take it that way...

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